All seek pleasure.
Your measure, however,
Is the type of it
You seek.
Originally I wrote:
All seek pleasure.
Your measure, howsoever,
Is the pleasure
You seek.
Which is better? The original sounds better, but is less clear.
Footnotes to Plato from the foothills of the Superstition Mountains
All seek pleasure.
Your measure, however,
Is the type of it
You seek.
Originally I wrote:
All seek pleasure.
Your measure, howsoever,
Is the pleasure
You seek.
Which is better? The original sounds better, but is less clear.
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