{"id":1351,"date":"2023-06-27T13:46:13","date_gmt":"2023-06-27T13:46:13","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/maverickphilosopher.blog\/index.php\/2023\/06\/27\/how-to-write-a-good-comment\/"},"modified":"2023-06-27T13:46:13","modified_gmt":"2023-06-27T13:46:13","slug":"how-to-write-a-good-comment","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/maverickphilosopher.blog\/index.php\/2023\/06\/27\/how-to-write-a-good-comment\/","title":{"rendered":"How to Write a Good Comment"},"content":{"rendered":"<p style=\"text-align: justify;\"><span style=\"font-family: georgia, palatino; font-size: 14pt;\">I offer a comment of mine as an example.&#0160; It is a brief response to a <em>Substack<\/em> entry by Elliot Crozat.&#0160; Here is the comment:<\/span><\/p>\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Box-module__display-flex--ZqeZt frontend-pencraft-Box-module__flex-direction-column--Rq7pk frontend-reader2-FeedPage2-module__feedCommentBody--igKQl\" style=\"text-align: justify;\">\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Text-module__size-20--rvGME frontend-pencraft-Text-module__line-height-30--I_4lx frontend-pencraft-Text-module__weight-normal--s54Wf frontend-pencraft-Text-module__font-text--QmNJR frontend-pencraft-Text-module__color-primary--ud4Z0 frontend-pencraft-Text-module__reset--dW0zZ frontend-pencraft-Text-module__body3--xcwfZ frontend-reader2-FeedPage2-module__feedCommentBodyInner--sF0AK\">\n<div class=\"ProseMirror FeedProseMirror\">\n<blockquote>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: georgia, palatino; font-size: 12pt;\">Very nice post, Elliot. Your reconstruction is valid. You say that (2) is &quot;solid.&quot; It is, but it is not self-evident. For one epistemically possible view is that the dead are nonexistent objects: they do not exist, but they have being, and have properties. Indeed, they <em>actually<\/em> have properties; it is not just that they could have properties. So on this view, there is no bar to a dead person&#39;s having the property of being communal or standing in the communal relation to other dead persons. This quasi-Meinongian view is skillfully developed by Palle Yourgrau in <em>Death and Nonexistence<\/em> (Oxford, 2019). It of course has problems of its own.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: georgia, palatino; font-size: 12pt;\">(5) and (7) are undoubtedly true.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: georgia, palatino; font-size: 12pt;\">And I agree with you that (1) is reasonably rejected on eternalism which is a plausible alternative to presentism. Surely wholly past individuals are not nothing despite their not being temporally present. They exist, but not at present. Presentists, despite a lot of fancy footwork, have a hard time accounting for this plain fact. This is one reason why eternalism is well-represented among contemporary philosophers. Eternalism allows for a watered-down personal immortality which has been embraced by Einstein, Charles Hartshorne, and most recently by John Leslie. The main difficulty of eternalism is to give a clear account of existence <em>simpliciter<\/em>. But it appears that the presentist faces the same difficulty assuming that &quot;Only the present exists&quot; is not a miserable tautology that boils down to &quot;Only what exists (present tense) exists (present tense.&quot;<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-family: georgia, palatino; font-size: 12pt;\">As for Aristotle, he is standardly taken to be a presentist (see Feser, e.g.) and thus your invocation of the Stagirite in support of eternalism is questionable.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Box-module__display-flex--ZqeZt frontend-pencraft-Box-module__flex-direction-column--Rq7pk frontend-pencraft-Box-module__flex-gap-4--zeW5_ frontend-pencraft-Box-module__padding-12--jTMsq frontend-pencraft-Box-module__border-top-transparent--NH9Pp\" style=\"text-align: justify;\">\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Box-module__display-flex--ZqeZt frontend-pencraft-Box-module__flex-align-center--rSd6h frontend-pencraft-Box-module__flex-gap-8--HFpIK frontend-pencraft-Box-module__padding-bottom-4--OFOny frontend-pencraft-Box-module__min-width-0--MCJwG\">\n<div class=\"frontend-reader2-PubIcon-module__root--jPSt4\"><span style=\"font-family: georgia, palatino; font-size: 14pt;\"><picture><source srcset=\"https:\/\/substackcdn.com\/image\/fetch\/w_40,h_40,c_fill,f_webp,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep\/https%3A%2F%2Fbucketeer-e05bbc84-baa3-437e-9518-adb32be77984.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2F7233340f-88e1-433b-b92e-15360688577f_827x827.png\" type=\"image\/webp\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" alt=\"\" class=\"frontend-components-responsive_img-module__img--Pgjj2 frontend-reader2-PubIcon-module__custom--CCNn3\" height=\"40\" sizes=\"auto, 100vw\" src=\"https:\/\/substackcdn.com\/image\/fetch\/w_40,h_40,c_fill,f_auto,q_auto:good,fl_progressive:steep\/https%3A%2F%2Fbucketeer-e05bbc84-baa3-437e-9518-adb32be77984.s3.amazonaws.com%2Fpublic%2Fimages%2F7233340f-88e1-433b-b92e-15360688577f_827x827.png\" width=\"40\" \/><\/source><\/picture><\/span><\/div>\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Box-module__ellipsis--pBigN frontend-pencraft-Text-module__size-11--k1e8b frontend-pencraft-Text-module__line-height-20--p0dP8 frontend-pencraft-Text-module__weight-medium--x7khA frontend-pencraft-Text-module__font-meta--U_nxy frontend-pencraft-Text-module__color-secondary--WRADg frontend-pencraft-Text-module__transform-uppercase--IDkUL frontend-pencraft-Text-module__reset--dW0zZ frontend-pencraft-Text-module__meta--jzHdd\"><span style=\"font-family: georgia, palatino; font-size: 14pt;\"><a class=\"frontend-reader2-Page-module__hoverLink--MvDt2 pencraft\" href=\"https:\/\/elliottcrozat.substack.com\/\" rel=\"noopener\" target=\"_blank\">PROVISIONAL PHILOSOPHICAL REFLECTIONS<\/a><\/span><\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Text-module__size-16--fFowu frontend-pencraft-Text-module__line-height-24--lgb2s frontend-pencraft-Text-module__weight-medium--x7khA frontend-pencraft-Text-module__font-text--QmNJR frontend-pencraft-Text-module__color-primary--ud4Z0 frontend-pencraft-Text-module__clamp--a1dYM frontend-pencraft-Text-module__clamp-2--kM7cV frontend-pencraft-Text-module__reset--dW0zZ frontend-pencraft-Text-module__body3--xcwfZ\">&#0160;<\/div>\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Text-module__size-16--fFowu frontend-pencraft-Text-module__line-height-24--lgb2s frontend-pencraft-Text-module__weight-medium--x7khA frontend-pencraft-Text-module__font-text--QmNJR frontend-pencraft-Text-module__color-primary--ud4Z0 frontend-pencraft-Text-module__clamp--a1dYM frontend-pencraft-Text-module__clamp-2--kM7cV frontend-pencraft-Text-module__reset--dW0zZ frontend-pencraft-Text-module__body3--xcwfZ\"><span style=\"font-family: georgia, palatino; font-size: 14pt;\">Time, Death, and Existence<\/span><\/div>\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Text-module__size-14--Ume6q frontend-pencraft-Text-module__line-height-20--p0dP8 frontend-pencraft-Text-module__weight-normal--s54Wf frontend-pencraft-Text-module__font-text--QmNJR frontend-pencraft-Text-module__color-secondary--WRADg frontend-pencraft-Text-module__clamp--a1dYM frontend-pencraft-Text-module__clamp-2--kM7cV frontend-pencraft-Text-module__reset--dW0zZ frontend-pencraft-Text-module__body4--Pl3xY\">&#0160;<\/div>\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Text-module__size-14--Ume6q frontend-pencraft-Text-module__line-height-20--p0dP8 frontend-pencraft-Text-module__weight-normal--s54Wf frontend-pencraft-Text-module__font-text--QmNJR frontend-pencraft-Text-module__color-secondary--WRADg frontend-pencraft-Text-module__clamp--a1dYM frontend-pencraft-Text-module__clamp-2--kM7cV frontend-pencraft-Text-module__reset--dW0zZ frontend-pencraft-Text-module__body4--Pl3xY\"><span style=\"font-family: georgia, palatino; font-size: 14pt;\">Cormac McCarthy\u2019s The Sunset Limited contains many good lines. Here\u2019s one from near the end of the play: \u201cYou can\u2019t be one of the dead because what has no existence can have no community.\u201d As I take it, \u201cone of the dead\u201d means \u201cone belonging to a community of dead persons.\u201d<\/span><\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Box-module__display-flex--ZqeZt frontend-pencraft-Box-module__flex-align-center--rSd6h frontend-pencraft-Box-module__flex-gap-4--zeW5_ frontend-pencraft-Box-module__padding-y-16--ohCEm frontend-pencraft-Box-module__border-top-detail--W9Yi4 frontend-pencraft-Box-module__border-bottom-detail--SbXzV\">\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Box-module__display-flex--ZqeZt\" style=\"text-align: justify;\">\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Box-module__display-flex--ZqeZt frontend-pencraft-Box-module__flex-align-center--rSd6h frontend-pencraft-Box-module__flex-gap-4--zeW5_\">&#0160;<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__flexGrow--mx4xz frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Box-module__display-flex--ZqeZt frontend-pencraft-Box-module__flex-justify-end--lwKjM frontend-pencraft-Box-module__flex-align-center--rSd6h frontend-pencraft-Box-module__flex-gap-4--zeW5_ frontend-pencraft-Box-module__min-width-0--MCJwG\">\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Text-module__size-14--Ume6q frontend-pencraft-Text-module__line-height-20--p0dP8 frontend-pencraft-Text-module__weight-normal--s54Wf frontend-pencraft-Text-module__font-text--QmNJR frontend-pencraft-Text-module__color-secondary--WRADg frontend-pencraft-Text-module__reset--dW0zZ frontend-pencraft-Text-module__body4--Pl3xY\" style=\"text-align: justify;\">&#0160;<\/div>\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Box-module__ellipsis--pBigN frontend-pencraft-Text-module__size-11--k1e8b frontend-pencraft-Text-module__line-height-20--p0dP8 frontend-pencraft-Text-module__weight-medium--x7khA frontend-pencraft-Text-module__font-meta--U_nxy frontend-pencraft-Text-module__color-secondary--WRADg frontend-pencraft-Text-module__transform-uppercase--IDkUL frontend-pencraft-Text-module__reset--dW0zZ frontend-pencraft-Text-module__meta--jzHdd\" style=\"text-align: justify;\"><span style=\"font-family: georgia, palatino; font-size: 14pt;\">JUNE 27, 2023<\/span><\/div>\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Box-module__ellipsis--pBigN frontend-pencraft-Text-module__size-11--k1e8b frontend-pencraft-Text-module__line-height-20--p0dP8 frontend-pencraft-Text-module__weight-medium--x7khA frontend-pencraft-Text-module__font-meta--U_nxy frontend-pencraft-Text-module__color-secondary--WRADg frontend-pencraft-Text-module__transform-uppercase--IDkUL frontend-pencraft-Text-module__reset--dW0zZ frontend-pencraft-Text-module__meta--jzHdd\" style=\"text-align: justify;\">&#0160;<\/div>\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Box-module__ellipsis--pBigN frontend-pencraft-Text-module__size-11--k1e8b frontend-pencraft-Text-module__line-height-20--p0dP8 frontend-pencraft-Text-module__weight-medium--x7khA frontend-pencraft-Text-module__font-meta--U_nxy frontend-pencraft-Text-module__color-secondary--WRADg frontend-pencraft-Text-module__transform-uppercase--IDkUL frontend-pencraft-Text-module__reset--dW0zZ frontend-pencraft-Text-module__meta--jzHdd\" style=\"text-align: justify;\"><span style=\"font-family: georgia, palatino; font-size: 14pt;\">&#8230;&#8230;&#8230;&#8230;&#8230;&#8230;&#8230;&#8230;&#8230;.<\/span><\/div>\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Box-module__ellipsis--pBigN frontend-pencraft-Text-module__size-11--k1e8b frontend-pencraft-Text-module__line-height-20--p0dP8 frontend-pencraft-Text-module__weight-medium--x7khA frontend-pencraft-Text-module__font-meta--U_nxy frontend-pencraft-Text-module__color-secondary--WRADg frontend-pencraft-Text-module__transform-uppercase--IDkUL frontend-pencraft-Text-module__reset--dW0zZ frontend-pencraft-Text-module__meta--jzHdd\" style=\"text-align: justify;\">&#0160;<\/div>\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Box-module__ellipsis--pBigN frontend-pencraft-Text-module__size-11--k1e8b frontend-pencraft-Text-module__line-height-20--p0dP8 frontend-pencraft-Text-module__weight-medium--x7khA frontend-pencraft-Text-module__font-meta--U_nxy frontend-pencraft-Text-module__color-secondary--WRADg frontend-pencraft-Text-module__transform-uppercase--IDkUL frontend-pencraft-Text-module__reset--dW0zZ frontend-pencraft-Text-module__meta--jzHdd\" style=\"text-align: justify;\"><span style=\"font-family: georgia, palatino; font-size: 14pt;\">So what makes my comment good?<\/span><\/div>\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Box-module__ellipsis--pBigN frontend-pencraft-Text-module__size-11--k1e8b frontend-pencraft-Text-module__line-height-20--p0dP8 frontend-pencraft-Text-module__weight-medium--x7khA frontend-pencraft-Text-module__font-meta--U_nxy frontend-pencraft-Text-module__color-secondary--WRADg frontend-pencraft-Text-module__transform-uppercase--IDkUL frontend-pencraft-Text-module__reset--dW0zZ frontend-pencraft-Text-module__meta--jzHdd\" style=\"text-align: justify;\">&#0160;<\/div>\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Box-module__ellipsis--pBigN frontend-pencraft-Text-module__size-11--k1e8b frontend-pencraft-Text-module__line-height-20--p0dP8 frontend-pencraft-Text-module__weight-medium--x7khA frontend-pencraft-Text-module__font-meta--U_nxy frontend-pencraft-Text-module__color-secondary--WRADg frontend-pencraft-Text-module__transform-uppercase--IDkUL frontend-pencraft-Text-module__reset--dW0zZ frontend-pencraft-Text-module__meta--jzHdd\" style=\"text-align: justify;\"><span style=\"font-family: georgia, palatino; font-size: 14pt;\">1. I interact <em>directly<\/em> with what the&#0160; author has written.<\/span><\/div>\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Box-module__ellipsis--pBigN frontend-pencraft-Text-module__size-11--k1e8b frontend-pencraft-Text-module__line-height-20--p0dP8 frontend-pencraft-Text-module__weight-medium--x7khA frontend-pencraft-Text-module__font-meta--U_nxy frontend-pencraft-Text-module__color-secondary--WRADg frontend-pencraft-Text-module__transform-uppercase--IDkUL frontend-pencraft-Text-module__reset--dW0zZ frontend-pencraft-Text-module__meta--jzHdd\" style=\"text-align: justify;\"><span style=\"font-family: georgia, palatino; font-size: 14pt;\">2. In doing so, I show that I have made a good faith attempt to understand him.<\/span><\/div>\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Box-module__ellipsis--pBigN frontend-pencraft-Text-module__size-11--k1e8b frontend-pencraft-Text-module__line-height-20--p0dP8 frontend-pencraft-Text-module__weight-medium--x7khA frontend-pencraft-Text-module__font-meta--U_nxy frontend-pencraft-Text-module__color-secondary--WRADg frontend-pencraft-Text-module__transform-uppercase--IDkUL frontend-pencraft-Text-module__reset--dW0zZ frontend-pencraft-Text-module__meta--jzHdd\" style=\"text-align: justify;\"><span style=\"font-family: georgia, palatino; font-size: 14pt;\">3. I tell him whether I agree or disagree and why.<\/span><\/div>\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Box-module__ellipsis--pBigN frontend-pencraft-Text-module__size-11--k1e8b frontend-pencraft-Text-module__line-height-20--p0dP8 frontend-pencraft-Text-module__weight-medium--x7khA frontend-pencraft-Text-module__font-meta--U_nxy frontend-pencraft-Text-module__color-secondary--WRADg frontend-pencraft-Text-module__transform-uppercase--IDkUL frontend-pencraft-Text-module__reset--dW0zZ frontend-pencraft-Text-module__meta--jzHdd\" style=\"text-align: justify;\"><span style=\"font-family: georgia, palatino; font-size: 14pt;\">4. I do not go off on irrelevant tangents.<\/span><\/div>\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Box-module__ellipsis--pBigN frontend-pencraft-Text-module__size-11--k1e8b frontend-pencraft-Text-module__line-height-20--p0dP8 frontend-pencraft-Text-module__weight-medium--x7khA frontend-pencraft-Text-module__font-meta--U_nxy frontend-pencraft-Text-module__color-secondary--WRADg frontend-pencraft-Text-module__transform-uppercase--IDkUL frontend-pencraft-Text-module__reset--dW0zZ frontend-pencraft-Text-module__meta--jzHdd\" style=\"text-align: justify;\"><span style=\"font-family: georgia, palatino; font-size: 14pt;\">5. I keep my comments brief and to the point.<\/span><\/div>\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Box-module__ellipsis--pBigN frontend-pencraft-Text-module__size-11--k1e8b frontend-pencraft-Text-module__line-height-20--p0dP8 frontend-pencraft-Text-module__weight-medium--x7khA frontend-pencraft-Text-module__font-meta--U_nxy frontend-pencraft-Text-module__color-secondary--WRADg frontend-pencraft-Text-module__transform-uppercase--IDkUL frontend-pencraft-Text-module__reset--dW0zZ frontend-pencraft-Text-module__meta--jzHdd\" style=\"text-align: justify;\"><span style=\"font-family: georgia, palatino; font-size: 14pt;\">6. I try to be helpful.<\/span><\/div>\n<div class=\"pencraft frontend-pencraft-Box-module__reset--VfQY8 frontend-pencraft-Box-module__ellipsis--pBigN frontend-pencraft-Text-module__size-11--k1e8b frontend-pencraft-Text-module__line-height-20--p0dP8 frontend-pencraft-Text-module__weight-medium--x7khA frontend-pencraft-Text-module__font-meta--U_nxy frontend-pencraft-Text-module__color-secondary--WRADg frontend-pencraft-Text-module__transform-uppercase--IDkUL frontend-pencraft-Text-module__reset--dW0zZ frontend-pencraft-Text-module__meta--jzHdd\" style=\"text-align: justify;\"><span style=\"font-family: georgia, palatino; font-size: 14pt;\">7. I do not use his site to promote myself or to advertise my wares or to dump large undigested quotations from other writers.<\/span><\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I offer a comment of mine as an example.&#0160; It is a brief response to a Substack entry by Elliot Crozat.&#0160; Here is the comment: Very nice post, Elliot. Your reconstruction is valid. You say that (2) is &quot;solid.&quot; It is, but it is not self-evident. For one epistemically possible view is that the dead &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/maverickphilosopher.blog\/index.php\/2023\/06\/27\/how-to-write-a-good-comment\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading<span class=\"screen-reader-text\"> &#8220;How to Write a Good Comment&#8221;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[109,204,71],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-1351","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-blogging","category-time-and-change","category-varia"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/maverickphilosopher.blog\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1351","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/maverickphilosopher.blog\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/maverickphilosopher.blog\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/maverickphilosopher.blog\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/maverickphilosopher.blog\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1351"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/maverickphilosopher.blog\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1351\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/maverickphilosopher.blog\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1351"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/maverickphilosopher.blog\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1351"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/maverickphilosopher.blog\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=1351"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}